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minus-squareMushuChupacabra@piefed.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up25·2 months agoAlligator Auschwitz phones were cut off. Then the beatings began, court docs say
minus-squareTachyonTele@piefed.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up10·2 months agoWhy did you just repeat the title?
minus-squareMushuChupacabra@piefed.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up22·2 months agoI corrected the title from Aligator Alcatraz to Aligator Auschwitz, to accurately reflect that it is a Concentration Camp.
minus-squareViking_Hippie@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up21·edit-22 months agoA clearer and arguably more elegant way would be to use strikethrough, as such: Aligator Alcatraz Auschwitz And you do strikethrough by surrounding the text with “~~” on either side, like this: ~~Alcatraz~~
minus-squareTachyonTele@piefed.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up8·2 months agoDefinitely. It would sell the ‘joke’ better that way
minus-squareMushuChupacabra@piefed.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·2 months agoOr, I could keep doing what I’m doing.
minus-squareViking_Hippie@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·edit-22 months agoSure, if you insist on being opaque and inelegant about it 🤷🏻
minus-squareMushuChupacabra@piefed.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·2 months agoThanks. Best of luck to you with your freelance unsolicited editor gig.
Alligator Auschwitz phones were cut off. Then the beatings began, court docs say
Why did you just repeat the title?
I corrected the title from Aligator Alcatraz to Aligator Auschwitz, to accurately reflect that it is a Concentration Camp.
A clearer and arguably more elegant way would be to use strikethrough, as such:
And you do strikethrough by surrounding the text with “~~” on either side, like this:
Definitely. It would sell the ‘joke’ better that way
Or, I could keep doing what I’m doing.
Sure, if you insist on being opaque and inelegant about it 🤷🏻
Thanks.
Best of luck to you with your freelance unsolicited editor gig.